I hope you update soon
PM me if you need any help.

I just came back to this chapter 'cause I have to say something-ANYONE can ask ANYONE out...! Yep. So Cili shouldn't be afraid. Just saying, just saying.

This chapter was funny. She uses the word 'stupid' alot. Yeah, I'm stupid too. Heh.

Whoa, I really like this story. I just love supernatural stuff. As for helping you, I really can't. Sorry. I'm lame.

But I hope something comes to you. I love it so far.

Update Soon, please.

From the way you write I can almost feel her loneliness. It's sad, already knowing what it feels like.

I like this story. And you're a nice author.

i dont know how to pm you...can't figure out pming at all. okay, my story plot:
liam=vampire
luke=vampire hunter
liam+luke=arch enemies
liam is the cause of her nightmares since she was young. ciliana ducks outside and liam kidnaps her to use against all vampire hunters. cil goes home (after multiple months of torture). becomes vampire hunter. kills vampires for a living. doesnt talk to josh or anyone anymore. including bff. is hunting liam. finds him. gets captured (again). he uses her to try to find out vampire hunter secrets. tortures her (again). uses the vid to try to get vampire hunters to tell him secrets. they dont. cil slowly starts to fall for liam, even as a vampire hunter, and even knowing she should hate him. luke attempts to rescue her, and only because cil steps in does he end up alive. cil eventually finds out liam is the most powerful vampire alive. born in the early 1600s. he bites her for her blood. a lot. its painful. very. eventually they both completely fall in love. he turns her into a vampire. luke and cil never see each other again. cil lives on in the eternal world of night.

quite cheerful. and pleasant. if you ask me.

yay! suspense! happy-making! muy happy-making! is he a vampire? probably? will i completely fall in love with liam? definitely. am i 2 obsessed with vampires for my own good? without a doubt.

hey beth
some problems in the original context. i did the changes next to them in parenthasese.
and now was (were. its plural, so were instead of was.) analyzing him like a piece of meat
Ugh, what a waste of money. this whole sentence makes no sense. shud it be what a waste of time? effort? anything other than money. its not right.

omg beth-la, this is amazing! i still like what the hell is normalcy better, but this is really good 2. its becoming another favorite

I kinda agree with Crimson Alibi on some stuff, but seriously; in my opinion, I think it's great! (That's code for: OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME I THINK I'M GONNA DIE IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE NOW NOW NOW!)

Hehe, I don't know what to suggest really. But I do hope this modivates you at least a bit to keep going with the story. I hate it when people dessert awesome stories like that.

I could suggest this to my friend and ask her to review and help you out. She has a wicked (albeit WIERD) imagination and she can probably come up with something. Or maybe she'll just say it's the awesomest thing she's ever read and threaten you with a candle stick and an empty soda can.

Like I said, her imagination is...um one of a kind, and she can think up many ways to tortue you with that. :D KEEP WRITING!

Sincerely,

Miss Sadistic.

P.S. *hands you a get well card* You know, for the writer's block. I hope you get well soon.

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P.P.S. WAIT! Here...*hands you some ice cream* GO! WRITE LIKE THE WIND!

I'm in the vibe, UPDATE> IMMEDIATELY>
NO CLIFFHANGERS!
NO CLIFFHANGERS!
I hate CLIFFHANGERS
YOU ARE AWESOME
DON"T BE SO DISCOURAGED BY THE LACK OF REVIEWS
YOU ROCK

YOUR # 1 FAN

(I HAVE MULTIPLE PERSONALITIES)

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

*grins*

Update or be afraid, very afraid. *Smirks* *Sun shines in through window* *Sparkles* *Disappears* *POF*

Ciliana! What is this rubbish! I'm coming home right now, do you have no friends that you resort to writing this romantic rubbish, who is this Liam Character?? And JOSH?! Don't even get me started. You have reading too much into Edward Cullen at night, I always knew you were being brainwashed with that twilighty books.
Don't phone me again, I'm on my way home.

awsome story!

What's gonna happen? What is Liam (or who is he?)? Why does he know everything about Ciliana? When are you going to tell us all of this?
So many questions are going through my head when I read this! (I know- that sounds so dorky, but...) Please please please put another chapter up soon!