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Michael Kim 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseIf you think God hasn't call in for a while, It may be time for you to get a new phone.
HauntedMisery 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseTHIS IS AMAZING. I love this, excellent work.
Written 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuseit's gorgeous. I love how cynical it is, especially the end. another wonderful piece from you!
girl without wings 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseI love the way this read like someone speaking to me. It made quite the impression. You’ve also done a really nice job at capturing a lot of emotion in not many words. I love the sorrow and cynicism of this piece. Keep up the great work.
XxVendettxX 2007-12-14 ch 1,	abuseYour words are sharp and true. Well done.
Aquafied 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abusethis seems so fresh from you how have you been?
Miz E. Mak 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseI liked your utilization of breaks, parenthesis, and imagery. But, the ending is really what pulled me in and made me love the poem. Great work. The ending says so much more than you've written, and that's what makes a work excellent... when it transcends the boundaries of language/words and takes on a new meaning, deep and powerful. write on.
simpleplan13 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseinteresting.. I like it.. especially the last 2 lines
dress her up in fairytales 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abusedon't get this review wrong because i really do love this piece and for some reason, the second stanza made me laugh. "but, then again, I could be wrong/God hasn’t called in a few years now" God calls to people in whispers, we hardly hear Him because we usually aren't listening for Him. and God may have called you once before but He's not obligated to call you again. sorry, i don't mean to get all preachy or whatever.
Indigo Carmine 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuse/but, then again, I could be wrong God hasn’t called in a few years now/ Wonderful.

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