Entertaining short story here. Quasi-satire and politics at once is a good combo.

You already know what i think about this. Very masterful. I really like the metaphor you have running through the entire thing. The writing is spot on and I really don't see how you could get anything less than an A.

But this is coming from a guy who barely graduated with a 3.0 so I dunno if that means much.

M.C.