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| JaveHarron 2007-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseEntertaining short story here. Quasi-satire and politics at once is a good combo. |
| Master Chief 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseYou already know what i think about this. Very masterful. I really like the metaphor you have running through the entire thing. The writing is spot on and I really don't see how you could get anything less than an A. But this is coming from a guy who barely graduated with a 3.0 so I dunno if that means much. M.C. |