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| thiefandbandit 2007-11-29 ch 1,  | abuseWow... You seem a little depressed here. It's a good poem, but it might be a good idea to add some rythm to it. It doesn't flow so well and feels more like prose. I don't mean to be harsh. Just trying to leaave suggestions. |