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Mosaic Stains 2008-03-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm starting to become really bad at this reviewing on time what with my classes, marriage, and work, which is a horrible example from me. But... I'm here today for now, so I hope that's a good turn. Now to get down to business, to the story certainly was fluffy and cotton candy like, but overall it was pretty much okay. The only very personal thing I disliked-- and I use I to water this opinion down-- was the way you portrayed the guys emotions so openly. All the men in my life and I know on a friend basis, are not very cozy with showing their emotions. In fact as you know, most Americans are pretty shut-lipped about expressing certain emotions. Crying would be under that list. So that was the only thing I was pretty uncomfortable with. Besides that, again I repeat it was preety much good. Sweet, fluffy, and nice. ~M.S. So I found
cls81690 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseAw dandelion fluff, I love it. This is incredibly cute and sweet and...just, everything sweet and good. I love that you never named the love interest, using 2nd person for him, although the MC was established as "Ellie," and I adore the way that this cheered me up when I hadn't even been sad. Well done!
sweet vanilla mint 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseThe events went by pretty fast... but despite that, great job! I love it! :)
TwinkleHeart 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseAW
Inkhearts and Inkstains 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseaw, cute fluff.
XoXCUTExCUPIDXoX 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseAww that was a cute one shot! :]
thecolourgrey 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseaww...that was so sweet...:)
RogueRose91 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseanother lil' beauty! Good job Mizz-I! Far more better than me atm, i'm experiencing a major writer's-block and its drivin' me NUTS. Hopefully i'll come out of it soon, but anyway, go u! -Roguey
Lily Llynn 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseCute and definitely fluffy. (: Thank you for adding it to the c2! (:

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