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Mosaic Stains
2008-03-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm starting to become really bad at this reviewing on time what with my classes, marriage, and work, which is a horrible example from me. But... I'm here today for now, so I hope that's a good turn.

Now to get down to business, to the story certainly was fluffy and cotton candy like, but overall it was pretty much okay. The only very personal thing I disliked-- and I use I to water this opinion down-- was the way you portrayed the guys emotions so openly. All the men in my life and I know on a friend basis, are not very cozy with showing their emotions. In fact as you know, most Americans are pretty shut-lipped about expressing certain emotions. Crying would be under that list.

So that was the only thing I was pretty uncomfortable with. Besides that, again I repeat it was preety much good. Sweet, fluffy, and nice.

~M.S.


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cls81690
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseAw dandelion fluff, I love it. This is incredibly cute and sweet and...just, everything sweet and good. I love that you never named the love interest, using 2nd person for him, although the MC was established as "Ellie," and I adore the way that this cheered me up when I hadn't even been sad. Well done!
sweet vanilla mint
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseThe events went by pretty fast... but despite that, great job! I love it! :)
TwinkleHeart
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseAW
Inkhearts and Inkstains
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseaw, cute fluff.
XoXCUTExCUPIDXoX
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseAww that was a cute one shot! :]
thecolourgrey
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseaww...that was so sweet...:)
RogueRose91
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseanother lil' beauty! Good job Mizz-I! Far more better than me atm, i'm experiencing a major writer's-block and its drivin' me NUTS. Hopefully i'll come out of it soon, but anyway, go u!

-Roguey
Lily Llynn
2007-11-29
ch 1,
abuseCute and definitely fluffy. (: Thank you for adding it to the c2! (:
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