depressingly realistic, given the confines of the story... and good :)

Very nice, very well written. I would have liked to see more of the happier times between B and I instead of the entire fic being so depressing. But it was still wonderful.

c:

Samantha

This was one of the first stories I read on Fictionpress and it remains one I like most. Good job all around with this one, although from beginning to end I went from liking Billy to being angry at him for how childish he was! That just shows how well you got Ika through, I would say.

This is neat! I have a feeling this will end badly though. You are doing a great job at everything!