hahahahha!

i love this story!!

love it~!

AWESOME>
is all i can say.
please, please update. i am officially in love with all ur stories, corny as they may be.
and dont misunderstand, i love corny. good ones, that is.

the story is brilliant!
charlotte

So I've read the first chapter of this.
This is more well written than You've Got Me.
I like how you portrayed Jayden more as a jerk when he was first introduced.
I don't know why, but Jennifer still irritates me. I think it's because of her little stunt she pulled on Jayden. But I'm enjoying this rewrite so far.
Your introduction in the PE class was interesting and set the plot, so that was great.
Good job, definitely keep it up!

great chapter! i think youre writing a great story- i love every single chapter!! PLEASE POST AGAIN AS SOON AS YOU CAN! :)

awesome story so far. please update again soon

I think the only thing you got wrong (and this is coming from my vast knowledge of French 2) is that Erin shouldn't be referring to Jayden as vous but instead tu.

Vous is the formal type of you that the french people use. Tu is informal.

So it would be (and I'm not sure if this is right or not):

Tu n'as-vous pas son nombre? (because Jennifer might still be a vous)

Je ne tu comprends pas, Jayden. Elle est restée dans notre maison pour une nuit, et avez-tu oubliés de demander son nombre sanglant?

Mais j'aime Jennifer! Jayden, je pense vraiment que cette fille est asses bonne pour tu! Elle ne ronfle pas même!

Qui veut des saumons quand tu peux avoir une petite amie, hmm?

Qui s'inquiète des sports quand tu peux avoir une petite amie?

Je ne tu comprends pas.

Tu es stupide. Je ne comprends pas la stupidité.

and for Jayden's remark:
Tu mourres, Erin Olivia Brock.

Probably half of that is wrong, but I guess I've made my point...
Nice story :D

just a curious question...when do you plan on updating? I kinda wanna read the next chapter...oh, by the way, I love this version much much better than You Got Me. So much more development and chemistry between Jayden & Jennifer...haha

This is so great! I hope that you update soon!

oh my fucking god! i was laughing my fucking ass off reading just the first chapter! Hurry up and finish the story!

Hey

REALLY GOOD STORY

PLEASE update ASAP!

and if you want more chemistry between Jayden aand Jennifer I think kissing and stuff always works (wink, wink);p

But you're the writer (adn a brilliant one at that)

Keep on Writing =]

P.S. Are you from London?

haha...this story is great. can't wait to see what happens next!

ahh. im gonna feel sorry for either alex or jayden when they dont get the girl.
interesting story so far i love it :D

wow! i like the retake even better than i did "you've got me".(:

i really like jayden too! i'm not sure if i'd be really helpful with advice though, so i thought i'd just covey my appreciation for the story:D