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Moonlit Promise 2008-07-18 ch 8,	abusexD! Sit there and look retarded. That was awesome. I almost couldn't hold my laughter in and I'm at work and I'm sure people would have been staring. But I did do this odd bouncing up and down, holding my mouth and stomach, rocking back and forward thing... I don't know if that's normal... But yeah.
Moonlit Promise 2008-07-18 ch 7,	abuseOh, goodness. Online translators suck. But it is hard to write something out in French if you don't know the language... I just asked my best guy friend if he gets a fluttery stomach and he said yes, so I guess they do. Weird, thinking about guys having feelings when sometimes they don't show anything at all.. It's actually giving me a fluttery stomach. @.@ Haha, condoms. Funny. :]
RoseLife 2008-07-16 ch 8,	abuseAHH i LOVE this story! its funny, sarcastic and very cuute :D ideas? humm.. maybe you could have Alex walk in on Jayden and Jen kissing? that would probably cause contraversy or bring Jens father absuing her into the story, so maybe Jayden finds her getting abused and saves her? or gets into more trouble or somthing like that :D but please do continue this! i dont think you have updated in a while but i hope you do! becuase im sure there are heaps more ppl dying to read the next chappie!! ^_^
brokencrystal7 2008-06-27 ch 8,	abusegreat job with the story. i already read the original story and i love both of them. i love Erin, she just seems really funny and annoying at some times but at the same time funny. cant wait for the next chapter.
J.C. Lyn 2008-06-20 ch 8,	abuseOh. A redux.
Temple Trees 2008-06-11 ch 8,	abuseUpdate. Soon. Please?! Love your story.
missraggamuffin 2008-06-03 ch 8,	abuseah! now i really have to drop a review! I've almost read all of youre stories! fluffy, lovely, and cute, all of them! wee~ haha, i like erin and jayden's parents. it's a fresh change from all the stories that's got their parents divorced/fighting/dead/hateful. aw aw, i'm lamenting right now because there's no way alex and jennifer are ever gonna be together and i like them as a couple very much. they're so cute :3 but ah well, jayden is nice and funny anyway. keep writing~~ good luck~~ :)
Simple Thoughts 2008-05-27 ch 8,	abuseI'm enjoying the revised version of this story alot. However, is it necessary for you to put french in your story when you can't speak it? It has no relevance to the plot, and it has many mistakes. If you really feel its necessary for some later point in your story I guess I can fix your french for you(I'm fluent), but take it out if its not necessary. Oh and most of the links for your pictures don't work. Well, please update soon! I can't wait
gulistanlik 2008-05-18 ch 8,	abuseO_O Erin seriously reminds me of a typical older sister, though a bit exaggerated. But I love her hehe, she rocks! I'm loving this fic, dearest, I do hope you'll be able to update soon. And I'm guessing that Alex is in love with Jennifer but Jennifer is too dense to notice that, right? Keep up the good work, dearest! gulistanlik
gulistanlik 2008-05-17 ch 3,	abuseActually this chapter was incredibly interesting, I understand much better why the hell Jennifer is acting all bitchy. Must read on! gulistanlik
gulistanlik 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abuseOkay I don't understand what the big deal is if he's still a virgin, like that makes you the biggest lowlife in the world. Seriously, there's something wrong with these people. Woah Jennifer is one manipulative bitch. O_O Must read on! gulistanlik
White Rose Blossom 2008-05-17 ch 8,	abuseAh, great chapter :D I love Erin, she's awesome, setting them up and all. Poor Jayden tho... Can't wait to read more!! -Aria
Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-05-17 ch 8,	abusei love the story cant wait for more! --iflyhugs
Incurable Dreamer 2008-05-16 ch 8,	abuseI thought this story had died! I'm so glad that you haven't abandoned this. I love the chemistry between Jaden and Jennifer. I enjoyed reading the interaction near the end, where it was just so full of tension. "She didn’t know why, but it felt easier to be sarcastic around Jayden." I can definitely understand that. And Erin is a colorful character, too. sigh But was it really necessary to keep us on our toes with that cliffhanger? XD
I-Just-Dont-Give 2008-05-15 ch 8,	abuseOH can i pikc the scene?

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