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| Moondog Dozier 2007-12-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis runs the spectrum of emotions well. Very self-reflective and sincere. I like the ambiguity of it. The questioning, and the half-told answers. "Delayed gratification comes with maturity", is a fabulous line. It encompasses so much of the truth of the transition. Well written work. You've done an excellent job with the depth in your recent works by using universally relatable emotion to capture the specific picture so well. MD:77. |