Odd story, but I liked it.

Hi! Thank you for your story. Please write more.

Cool! Awesome _ lol. I love Greek mythology lol.

that's cool! a really interesting way to explain it all. i like how the river made Cerberus, Charon and the Moirae, never heard it that way before.

I really like the ending, it's original. All of it was really original. Good job.