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| M. Arceneaux 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is an absolutely fantastic story. Your details are just real enough, and I love your characters--Mr. Necklace Vampire himself in particular is wonderfully mysterious. Also very fond of that circular ending--it gives the story an almost fairy-tale sort of feel to it. This is easily one of the best things I've read on this site, you're quite talented. The only thing I found difficult to believe were some of Susan's protestations--I understand she's trying to keep the world the way it is for herself, but they still ring a bit hollow from time to time. At any rate, really great stuff. Yours, M. |
| bittersweet-vines 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseLovely details. You had some very interesting details--the stories really engaged the reader. Nice characterization as well. |
| Tears of Trees 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was really nicely written. I really liked it. |