This was so Beautiful and heartfelt!! I LOVEd it. It was really amazing and very Deep!! Keep writing!

wow that was really amazing. i like the flow of the whole thing. made me really sad and made me think a little. one of those poems that makes you want to analyze yourself and your relationships. well, great job. really loved it. (:

Wow, it's beautiful and sad. I actually cried a little.

This is pure poetry. There really isn't any other way to describe it. The way you rhymed it perfectly, the metaphor you based it on, the feeling and the meaning... I want to keep reading it over and over again until the words are permanently printed in my heart. I want to remember this poem. I can see it become one of the most revered, remembered, and famed poems out there.
Amazing job ♥

Wow! Great imagery! It made it seem so much more powerful, emotional.
My jaw literally DROPPED when I read the line "Since they found you dead..." I wasn't expecting that. Great job. Not many things in poems suprise me.
Excellant, in my personal opinion.

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Keep it up!

I came across this. Let me write you a review. :D

I think I was tearing up when I was reading this. It was very emotional and, I guess it was really sad. No, not guess. It WAS really sad. But it's great, so don't worry. I liked the way you played with the words in your poem.

I did enjoy your poem. A lot. I think I would've cried if I wasn't in such a good mood.

Good job. Keep writing~

owh...how sad...


Good job in capturing the emotions~~bravo`

Wow is that a true story, if so god damn. I loved it so elegant and graceful. Message me if its a true story or not I have to know.

It's sad, i admit i almost cry! it's well structured =D it's so good, keep writing more =)

Wow, that poem is awesome, it depics a love so strong. It is sad at some point but you can see the dedication as well. Goodluck with your poem, i hope to see more of them.

One of the best poems I've read on this site. No lie!
Perfect rhythm and I was deeply impressed.
Tugged my own heartstrings.
You have potential to make this big.

it seems more like a song than a poem.

it's nice :D

for me, it showed great love XD it's very touching

All i can say is "Wow.."

i liked the way you used the word heartstrings..
as the previous reviews had said, your poem really did convey a lot of emotions..

but there's a part that i don't really understand.. forgive me for the criticism but.. i really don't get how someone could hear their last heartbeat..

but i really enjoyed your poem.
keep up the great work!

i luv it! my eyes have tears in them... so sad!
So ur boyfriend died? wow! talk about soap opera!

-SC