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Reviews For: Emeralds

Mish-mash Carpet
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseThis story is beautiful and sad at the same time, I am sorry i have nothing constructive to say in the way of changing it. You captured the emotion very well and didn't over shoot the way some people do when writing emotional pieces.
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