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| Mish-mash Carpet 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseThis story is beautiful and sad at the same time, I am sorry i have nothing constructive to say in the way of changing it. You captured the emotion very well and didn't over shoot the way some people do when writing emotional pieces. |