 TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Oh I like this poem! Very striking imagery and it reflects the beautiful darkness and mystery of love. Very well done, don't ever stop writing these kind of poems dah-ling! x |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-31 . chapter 1really powerful image... its different and beautiful.. awesome job |
 Basara 2007-12-01 . chapter 1a cruel taste of love...
nice... |
 windy girl 2007-11-30 . chapter 1It's nice. I like the first line. :)
Though, I think 'bleeds his blood tears' is a little redundant. But that might just be me...?
-pb |