Oh I like this poem! Very striking imagery and it reflects the beautiful darkness and mystery of love. Very well done, don't ever stop writing these kind of poems dah-ling! x

really powerful image... its different and beautiful.. awesome job

a cruel taste of love...

nice...

It's nice. I like the first line. :)

Though, I think 'bleeds his blood tears' is a little redundant. But that might just be me...?

-pb