 Storm Petrel 2007-12-18 . chapter 2Interesting story, the transition between chapters is very abrupt, so much so that they seem to be two completely different stories, though both are well written and with lovely imagery, it isn't clear whether the girl in the yellow dress is Aile, but seeing no other link, that is what I assumed, right or wrong.
Please continue, if the girls in each chapter are different people, they're both intiguing characters, and if not, then Aile is doubly so. |