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Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis...
2008-07-20
ch 7,
abuseI'd like to see more, but it's fine where it ended. TWAS great!
Bloodfeeder94
2008-06-06
ch 7,
abuseHOLY CRAP, YOU HAD BETTER WRITE ANOTHWER CHAPTER! *then looks ashamed at how loud I am yelling* I mean, pleaze write another chapter I would abosolutly kill to see what they turn out to be...
HOLY CRAP!
Bloodfeeder94, one of your, ehh, more enthusiasitic reviewers.
Syd-chan
2008-04-29
ch 7, anon.
abuseThe ending was so cute. Art is such a silly boy. You should so write another chapter. The ending just leaves you hanging and wanting more.
Good job with the sweet story.
Bluorange
2008-04-26
ch 7,
abuseWhat, no more! Please do i have to beg you? No wait bribe you *muahahah* I have Billie Joe and I'm not giving him back till you write more (pwetty pwease with cherries and whipped cream and chocolate sprinkles) Actually I don't want to give him up so we have to share. You can have him weekends. We can send him in overnight mail. And if what you do write is ubber cute and slashy you can also have Brendon Urie. teehee ^-^ So now that i have bribed you enough- write! (sorry too demanding)Oh and sorry I'm being so annoying but I saw Across the Universe again today and that mixed with slash and pixie sticks and mountain dew make me really hyper. YAY! *runs around in circles* ! *does a little dance* Please I want more of Art... and El!
~Manana Iguana~
Instant-Soup
2008-03-30
ch 7,
abusei like fluff
:]
x
Raaawrrr
2008-03-26
ch 7, anon.
abuseAw!
Sequelsequelsequel pleease?
But I'd be satisfied with another chapter =)
Epilogue?
Tsuki Mahou
2008-03-19
ch 7, anon.
abuseYOU MUST WRITE MORE :]
please?
i was laughing and awwing
and laughing some more
my mother thought i was going insane
:]
Catseye*Rose
2008-03-08
ch 7,
abuseI loved this SO MUCH. It made me laugh and "aw" multiple times. Very cute XD Plus the pop culture references are always fun :P
TheNarglesWillEatYou
2008-02-28
ch 7,
abusei think it has a good end, but you could always have more! god! i think u r my favorite slash author on here!
Tohru Daihikashousha
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abusewell this is a review on everything, can't type long, but I think you should make a sequel :P
kcn
2008-02-15
ch 7,
abuseIt's so... unfinished. There are things that we don't know! I, for one, want to hear more of the story. FLUFF DAMNIT! I WANT FLUFE!
Lyra Waterflame
2008-01-15
ch 7,
abuseFunky. Please write more soon?
zomfgzitseffay
2008-01-05
ch 7,
abuseHii,

So, I'm back.

I never want to leave my computer alone ever again, my darling lover, how I missed it so! No Internet, no word to write my beautiful, awe-inspiring story ideas, no contact with ANYONE! I love my computer too much, I SHALL NEVER LEAVE IT AGAIN.

Okay, I'm done. =] Missed you! =P

Anywho, your ending is PERFECT. In my opinion, I don't think you ended it early and it wasn't a disappointment to me, at all! I loved the ending, it was beautifully perfect and I just wanted to snatch Art and Jaro (hehe, I love that! Jaro...) and cuddle them so much till they turn an adorable shade of blue. Well, I really wouldn't do that but they are just too cute.

I loved the bit when Jaro was ranting about how he hates Heather and his dead corpse in the toilet. That was so cute and I was laughing when I read Art's beautiful line, "Baby, you know you can’t ** me yet! You haven’t even proposed!" Tres ADORABLE, darling.

Loved it, loved it, loved it! You are a beautiful writer! I'm so PROUD and so HAPPY that you've finished your story!

My darling baby is growing up... -tears- HAHA, anywho, really, CONGRATULATIONS, that's awesome and in less than a year too! =D
An amazing inspiration you are to me!

Thank you for putting up Fate's Fools and for writing it, it was amazing! You are amazing!

Loads of
EllYouSeeWhy
2008-01-04
ch 7,
abuseyey you
I love radiohead, chicago, donnie darko & battle royale (:
and everything about this except the leather jacket D;
UPDATE :]
Redcloak
2007-12-25
ch 7,
abuseAnother chapter *would* be nice.

Fluffy slash... hard to beat that.
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