You write wondrful one-shots with the most adorable characters ever. I mean Joshua is so sweet and cute and and I just want to pinch his little cheeks and squeal over him like old hags sequel over little adorable babies.

Again, ADORABLE!
I will read the rest later.
Gotta get ready for work.
:(

xoxoxoxoxoxoxo,
Ty

aww, that was really sweet.

Lovely one shot, I really did enjoy it. Wouldn't mind if you decided to continue it either... ;)

But yes, great grammar and spelling, smooth flow, snappy dialogue = good work.

Keep writing, you're awfully good at it.

-Bleep

aaw...just too cute ^^

Aww!

This is adorable!

=D

It was cute!:)

Aw. Loved it, it was very well written :)

aw, that was so adorable. I think changing the pov halfway through really added to the story. Great job!