i felt the same way before, but anyways, i love your poem, especially the ending!

I like the rhyming and the repetition.. I also really like the ending... I can definitely relate

the rhyme is pretty good, it could be a nice song, I like this part: He broke my heart With no explanation :)

We seldom are. How much does it hurt to give it your all and have nothing to show for it? However, in the end, you can still say you tried. It should be good enough, but it never heals the hurt. My condolences. Perhaps the next person can mend your heart.

Good poem. Have a nice day.

~Twilight Starr~

ooh my.
very well written, and i hope things get better for you soon.

aw that's how i am with my bf he's such an **

but i'tm really good i love it