Reviews for Of Dates and Zippers

Reviews For: Of Dates and Zippers

Teffie 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseWow. So few words, yet such a strong impact! I really can't find anything to correct in this little story. It's a great concept, and you pulled it off. Good job!
a bitter kiss. 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseYou know? It's great because what you can write in 100 words is better than what most can do with a thousand. I could feel the buildup as Derek asked Rosalie (who's a major **) out. The buildup was very important in the story - and man, you aced that in 100 words. Amazing.
starlit x sky 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseHaha. I really liked this. It was great, and the even greater thing about it is the fact it's only 100 words. I felt really bad for Derek, poor guy. But great job!
McQuinn 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseBah! What a **. Well, at least he tried. What I like about the brevity is that it leaves a lot for the imagination. I mean, now I'm asking myself how he could have reacted. Will he turn around and walk away, pretending like he didn't give a crap? Turn red and vow never to think or speak to her again? Will he cry in the bathroom? Overall, I enjoyed. Nice work! -McQuinn
Zonne 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abuseAw.. poor boy. Really good for 100 words! Made me feel for the guy and laugh at the same time. Ah highschool.
candid 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abuseWell, that was pretty bitchy. I feel sorry for the guy. Turned down just because he didn't X his Z. ::huggles him::
LaraineGlass 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuseThat would be so funny if it happened at my school. The ending really took me by surprise, and this is basically one of the few one shots that made me life. Hehe.
masterful me 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseI would laugh so hard if I saw this happen at my school. It's fun this is so short and you leave it as a cliffhanger -- leaving endless possibilities about what might have happened afterward. Still, if you ever expand on this, let me know!
stephy151 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseLMAO! Loved the ending. I like her, in my head I see her as a , and we all know are awesome! -Stephanie
Tragically Charismatic 2007-12-20 ch 1,	abuseOh, no!! Ahh poor Derek! I feel so sorry for him! Gah. This is a brilliant piece. The ending's really unexpected and funny but ergh I feel so sorry for the poor boy...wonderful job.
Saskia Tielens 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseOoh, crushing! (one small nitpicky grammar thing: "you're" in the penultimate sentence should be "your").
HopelessDreamer07 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseHaha. This is funny! Short, but funny. :D And thanks for reviewing my story! I'm glad you like it! ^^ I'm trying to work on the next chapter now so I can get it out tomorrow, but don't know for sure yet if I will. You should write more! (I guess this is supposed to be 100 words or something, but you should write another story, in any case) :-)

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