Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)

~Carm~

That was a very cute chapter! I hope you'll update soon

That chapter was actually odd (In a good way). What are the odds that Danielle and Anthony will have lockers next to each other, and be in every class together? On to the next.

I really liked this chapter, but it was acctually a bit too creepy! On to the next.

Yeah for longer chapters! I liked it, you just have to be careful with tenses. You switched from past to present a couple times, and that throws the story off. Otherwise than that, I liked it. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Faith

Good chapter, I like Danielle, she seems to be a good main character. Update soon! And try to make your chapters longer :)
Faith

Ooh, I'm already in love with this story. It's been awhile since I've found a story that I just adored.

You've not only got a way with words, but strong characters and a great storyline.

Keep up the great work :)

~Carm~

Good chapter, this story has much potential. There are a couple things I noticed wrong though, such as, thoughts are in italics. Fairly easy. Second, there are a couple grammatical and punctuational errors, nothing too big, but enough to ruin the flow of the story. Thirdly, some sentences are rather choppy. They don't flow very well. Be sure to try and get a rhythm to your story so the writing is more matured. If you have any questions on this, feel free to pm me. Keep it up, and update soon.
Faith

Sounds good, I wouldn't put it all in italics, only her thoughts. Also, this would be the prologue, not the epilogue. Even if you're showing the end of the story, it's still the prologue. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith