That's so funny! This was cute!

the beginning is wonderfully written and the ending is funny and very cute

Thanks for your reviews!

LOL! i actually really really like the poem...!

i think ur summary was really good too :) it made me interested in reading the poem.

the poem reminds me of when my brain just wanders around when i'm trying to go to sleep at night.

I love the lightheartedness and the rhythm of the poem :)
Good job!! :)

It makes me chuckle. I like the ending. It wraps up everything in a humorous and clever way. Nice job!

Write on!

Haha nice poem! ;) Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^