Wow, that was great!! I loved the plot! It was so uplifting. Great job! I did find 3 errors. Your first sentence is a run on sentence. ...anyway, let me go check it out. This makes no sense. The let me part. It's written from his point of view, so I don't think he would be asking to go. It's at the end of the paragraph where he's watching TV. I just out of my bed and knelt in prayer beside it. There is a word missing. This at the end of the paragraph after he hears God speak to him the first time.

Those are just minor errors. This was still an awesome story! I loved it. I needed to read this. God Bless!! This is going on my favorites list.