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| Lady Saphira 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's really beautiful, great work. Lady Saphira |
| concerto49 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseIt was really cool how you managed to mix life and sailing into one. The images and metaphors were cool. Managed to capture some good points :) |
| Natana Reccama 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI think that there is alot of truth in this poem. It's kind of like life in a nutshell. I really like it! I think I might make it my Philosophy! ~NR |
| Gulia 2007-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like. Especially the last four lines. Yay. |
| Aomera 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abusetrue and wonderfully said. :) |
| Cross Rose 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's cool xD |