That's really beautiful, great work.

Lady Saphira

It was really cool how you managed to mix life and sailing into one. The images and metaphors were cool. Managed to capture some good points :)

I think that there is alot of truth in this poem. It's kind of like life in a nutshell. I really like it! I think I might make it my Philosophy! ~NR

I like. Especially the last four lines. Yay.

true and wonderfully said. :)

That's cool xD