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Casey Drake 2008-02-01 . chapter 3
Wolves' Pack? Hunters? Hmm...

:) CD
Dinuriel 2008-01-27 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. I liked the characterizations-- Tolea as understanding and kind (just like in real life), and Jessica as really creepy (also much like real life).

I am eagerly anticipating my own first appearance...

XD
Heart of String 2008-01-27 . chapter 3
Ahem...I hate to point out, you forgot to explane 'String'.See, you called me that at...about the point where we discoverd the brik.Maybe Finn and Fenrir can call me that and explane it's origin...WAIT, DOSE IT EVEN HAVE A ORIGIN!?Man...WE NEED DISCUSSIN TO DO!But, I loved it.Cant WAIT for next chapter.

-String

PS: GET YOUR CROW OFFA ME NOW!HE'S GONNA PECK MY EYES OUT!
Casey Drake 2007-12-28 . chapter 2
-sigh- Siri is an incubus or something, right?

:) CD
dinuriel 2007-12-23 . chapter 2
QUESTION!! When do I come into the story? lol
Heart of String 2007-12-19 . chapter 2
(scowls at the couple from a tall tree)Well, you certainly are a regal **, Siri...
Solace: TOBY!OH TOBY!
Toby: (falls out of tree anfd glares at the young girl)What do you want!?
Sol: Tolea has christmas shopping she wants us to get done!
Toby: ...And this requires me?
Sol: she wouldent trust me with money.
Toby: (sigh)Fine...Let's go.(both walk away)

-String
Casey Drake 2007-12-10 . chapter 1
SWEET!

:) CD
taddy 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
"Then his words had hit her and she realized that she hadn’t said a word."

Mind reader... Yippee. I like this story.

"Finn’s smile wavered just slightly—six years of martial arts on her part could certainly take on ten years of music on his, and he didn’t need to go to school with another black eye and make up a story about epic battles, when in reality his ten-year-old sister had punched him."

Awh sad.

"The last words seemed to echo through the air, and then everything blurred, then faded to black."

yahahaha.



Okay so I like this story a lot.

It shall be favorited!

Bye bye FD

I miss you!

No Finn can't die!

Micaiah can cry for books when siblings die.

ITS THE WEEKEND.

AND IT SNOWED.

YAY.
Midnightmare-the original 2007-11-30 . chapter 1
Neato! It's funny what caffine rush can do to a person. How much did you have? :O Lol. Update when you can! :D
Heart of String 2007-11-30 . chapter 1
She had BLONDE hair?Hmn...So, you didnt tell me bout the flashy lights!col...we can discuss more later, okay?Maybe monday?But, wow, this is AWSOME!Im really happy!And you didnt add my pushing for the story.(giggles)Oh well.Lotsa love, and Im gonna read it over and OVER till next chappie!

-String
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