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| simpleplan13 2007-12-18 ch 1, | I love how you mention all those places... and the whole painting this wonderful.. I really like the ending of the second stanza that was very powerful |
| Clarelouise 2007-12-16 ch 1, | i love the way you identify with different people in this - 'or perhaps you recall' etc, its a really nice way to do it, looking at the same thing from different points of view just one little thing, should it b 'lose yourself' not 'loose yourself'? otherwise perfect and a lovely take on the landmarks of london! |
| SilverTwilight 2007-11-30 ch 1, | It's unbelievable that words can re-create the beauty of the images. Nice descriptions. You always manage to astound me. ~ Dx |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-11-30 ch 1, | i love it my ferie, i get this feeling ALL the time, and i mean all the time, at least you have a camera *pout* i'm having such a rave preparing an outfit for tommorow. love you x |