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simpleplan13
2007-12-18
ch 1,
I love how you mention all those places... and the whole painting this wonderful.. I really like the ending of the second stanza that was very powerful
Clarelouise
2007-12-16
ch 1,
i love the way you identify with different people in this - 'or perhaps you recall' etc, its a really nice way to do it, looking at the same thing from different points of view
just one little thing, should it b 'lose yourself' not 'loose yourself'?
otherwise perfect and a lovely take on the landmarks of london!
SilverTwilight
2007-11-30
ch 1,
It's unbelievable that words can re-create the beauty of the images. Nice descriptions. You always manage to astound me.
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Dx
Wolf bathed in Star-light
2007-11-30
ch 1,
i love it my ferie, i get this feeling ALL the time, and i mean all the time, at least you have a camera *pout* i'm having such a rave preparing an outfit for tommorow.
love you
x
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