I think this is just lovely. I love the visualizations. The part that said "I am from the Whispers of the Woods and the Soils of the Ground," really touched my heart and almost caused me to tear up for personal reasons.

This is beautiful.

“Jillian! Don’t be so loud! And come inside!” - don't people STILL scream that at you?

But seriously, that was great jillian! I reaqlly love it, you deserved your 100!

This is a nice poem with a lot of visualization. It reminds me though of a song very similar to this. I would be careful of the similarities as some readers might compare the two.