Reviews for A Deathly Vision - FictionPress.com

-Truly-Verily-Purely-Me- 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseO! Spoky! "I am your savor(?) I am your death, 'the darkness rasps," that line sent a shiver down my spine.
Timeless Asuka 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseSorry for alerting last time. It was an accident. Wonderful imagery, like always. "Your eyes open to the bloody moon/“I am your savor. I am your death,”/the darkness rasps." Beautiful, and I have actually heard that in the wind before. Kind of creepy, but it is true. I think I can relate to this poem a lot. Keep up the amazing work. ~~ AmarokUchiha ~~
poisonedpassions. 2007-12-03 ch 1,	abuseWow. Theres something about that poem, it draws you into thinking. Almost like a trance. Definitely well written, with amazing imagery. Keep writing! Keep your head high **.
Princess-anna57 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseInteresting piece. There's always room for improvement but I think it's fine as it is. Great job. Thank you for sharing. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^