It was really nice, such a great idea you had! The red telephone thing, I wasnt expecting anything like what you wrote! good job, very good job indeed ;)

Beautifully written. A well thought out version of Cinderella, fantastic work. :D

Epic. :D

Oh! I love it! Thank you so much 3

I love it! Really love it. It's awesome! :)

Hi, I've read this story about 5 times now and I still love reading it 'til now.

I got this idea a while back and, while I'm not the best artist out here, I'd like to give it a shot and make this story a comic/manga adaptation, with your blessing, of course.

Regards,

fatelocks

This is a pretty decent story, I'm just surprised at the lack of reviews it has. I've tried reading other stories not even half as good as this with many more reviews and it baffles me. Anyhow, good job.

It's an awesome story!

And it's really funny, too. I love the way you writed it. And the top of the iceberg are the first and last lines... it's just LOL

xD

WOO! FEMSLASH!

Aw.. Sweet ending.

There were so many laughable parts. Although... The foursome was totally unexpected, but still interesting.

Yay. )

“Your hands-” Kelly looked at Erika for a moment before saying, “Your hands are on my butt, Erika.” Erika froze for a moment before Kelly apologized. “Sorry. I mixed you up with that friend I kept talking about.”

I laughed out loud so hard.

Lol. aww thats so cute.

It was a little rushed but nevertheless it was satisfying and i adored it

NU Why does the chaos still continue? THERE MUST BE SOME SORT OF... i forget the word xD

Reasll nice chapter here, a little fast, but very well written nevertheless.

Love it.

Sam

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LoL! Geez, great Chapter...Erika's mom is a little kooky but I love her none-the-less.

LOL wow XD Cinderella XD indeed. ) XD hehe; wow; long awaited update. but an update never the less! thanks! hope to see more of them coming D