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poo-anonymous 2008-10-10 . chapter 11
Aw.. Sweet ending.

There were so many laughable parts. Although... The foursome was totally unexpected, but still interesting.

Yay. =)
poo-anonymous 2008-10-10 . chapter 10
“Your hands-” Kelly looked at Erika for a moment before saying, “Your hands are on my butt, Erika.” Erika froze for a moment before Kelly apologized. “Sorry. I mixed you up with that friend I kept talking about.”

I laughed out loud so hard.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-10-10 . chapter 11
Lol. aww thats so cute.

It was a little rushed but nevertheless it was satisfying and i adored it
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-10-05 . chapter 10
NU Why does the chaos still continue? THERE MUST BE SOME SORT OF... i forget the word xD

Reasll nice chapter here, a little fast, but very well written nevertheless.

Love it.

Sam
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CheetoFlavoredLove 2008-09-30 . chapter 10
LoL!! Geez, great Chapter...Erika's mom is a little kooky but I love her none-the-less.
Omok 2008-09-30 . chapter 10
LOL wow XD Cinderella XD indeed. =) XD hehe; wow; long awaited update. but an update never the less! thanks! hope to see more of them coming =D
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-09-05 . chapter 9
i hate the sisters and the step mom

awesome story
Miannette 2008-09-01 . chapter 9
Awesome!!
Omok 2008-09-01 . chapter 9
omg another long awaited up date XD I hope you'd up date soon. Lol. XD they take so long most of the time. T-T
CheetoFlavoredLove 2008-09-01 . chapter 9
AWESOMENESS!!
She whom reviews 2008-08-28 . chapter 8
I am too lazy to sign in so you'll just have to deal with it. :D

Anyways I love the story. Its a interesting take on the classic Cinderella story we know and love. - I'm seeing some connections in the web you are wheeving.

Kelly compared Erika to an very famous Actor. Not just in her abilities, but the fact Erika looks a lot like this actor. When Kelly told Erika in front of Buck that at her [Kelly's] B-day party, they where going to watch her [Kelly's] favorite Movie - Buck's reaction was to call Kelly's father, and have him, or so I am asuming, hide said movie. Why?

The step mother [I cant remember her name for the life of me at this time] refuses to allow Erika to watch movies [with the expection of cartoons/anime] Why?

What do we know of Erika's family? Not a whole lot. What are the connections between Erika's parents, Buck and Kyle? [Kelly's Father]

We know Buck was once/still is a big time lawyer, we know that Kyle is, from what I can tell, a big time agent for famous Actors, we know that Buck once represented Kyle...

Why is there a gag order?

Why does two of the biggest newspapers in the country want to speak to Erika?

I think, the easyest way to answer these questions would be to find out what Erika's father's last name was before he got married to her step mother. - I know what my gut saids...

But I am interested in seeing if I am right or not...

Hehe, in anycase, update soon. Cause I've think I've re-read this story three times now, and I'm still hungrying for more.
maverix 2008-08-14 . chapter 8
Ah wonderful story! I like it very much! I'm getting all anxious with the whole Buck/Kyle/Cheryl and the gag thing. I wanna know what the heck is going on with that D:

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work
poo-anonymous 2008-08-13 . chapter 8
I'm a bit confused from all bits and pieces, and I can't seem to put them together. Blah, I would reread the story again, but I'm lazy. Well, hopefully, it'll all come together soon.
LuciaLightning 2008-08-13 . chapter 8
wow this is so good!
But then again I was hooked after the summary :)
I so want Erika and Kelly to get together!
And I adore Mary and Kat together :)
Stupid Fiona and Jade :(
Update soon :):)
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CheetoFlavoredLove 2008-08-13 . chapter 8
Awesome Chapter!
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