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Reviews For: Live among them
simpleplan13
2007-12-01
ch 1, 		abuseI like this.. the whole color thing is awesome and I love the ending
Manuel Fajar
2007-11-30
ch 1, 		abuseNice thoughts — well written. Truth is somewhat gray and usually is coloured between extremes, however individuals can come in stark blacks and whites. Not sure I believe everyone's redeemable or wants to be redeemed or all agree on what redemption would be.

Thanks for your comment, m.
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