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Undead Serenade
2008-06-15
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abuseAdrenaline does seem that harmful, doesn't it? It puts pressure on us and makes our hearts go a thousand times more than we want it to. The haiku fits- is the first line five syallbles, though? "Boil-ing my blood" or is that four...?
My blue rose
2008-03-20
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abuseI love It!
Eadoin Flannery
2007-12-01
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abusei love it! very nice. keep it up!
Princess-anna57
2007-11-30
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abusePowerful haiku. I like it a lot. Well done. Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^
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