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| Undead Serenade 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseAdrenaline does seem that harmful, doesn't it? It puts pressure on us and makes our hearts go a thousand times more than we want it to. The haiku fits- is the first line five syallbles, though? "Boil-ing my blood" or is that four...? |
| My blue rose 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI love It! |
| Eadoin Flannery 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusei love it! very nice. keep it up! |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abusePowerful haiku. I like it a lot. Well done. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |