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the jazz
2008-06-30
ch 21,
abusemark was an interesting addition...the story is going pretty well. but i want to know more about remington and his story with harrison. exactly what happened?
Jangalian
2008-06-05
ch 11,
abuseMAN I'm behind on the times! I was trying to find which chapter I left off at in my rereading (cause I totally forgot everything haha -shame-) and I kept reading stuff way ahead and SPOILING EVERYTHING SRSLY haha ddhdjsksksh

BUT ANY WAY I'm SHAMELESSLY trying to be your 100th review before I continue ONWARD like the 15:67 addict I am 8D

I LOVE YOU PUNKIE PIE (:
Ty Taco
2008-06-05
ch 21,
abuseI loved this chapter.
Finney's family thingy was sad.
But then again, who's childhood isn't sad.
I haven't ever met ANYONE with a good childhood that lived in middle-america.
Because the unsurity about money causes tension.
Tension causes arguments.
And, as Finney would say, the rest is history.

I love this book [you knew that though].
Can't wait for 22.

xoxoxo,
Ty
DeidaraXTobi
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abuseThis seems pretty interesting. Don't have the time to catch up on it right now, but I'll get to it after work tomorrow. Faving it. :)
patsylooj
2008-06-04
ch 21,
abuseaw poor finlay. his childhood sounds so cute...i mean, the fake part of it.

and, hello, they kiss and harrison still has the puke breath. but, yeah, i guess that didn't really matter in that moment.

haha. yeah, finlay equals girl. it's always been obvious. he just needs to come to terms with it.

lovely as always. so eager for the finish! yet not. you know what i mean.
Rainbowz [too lazy to sign ...
2008-05-24
ch 20, anon.
abuseWah~ *_*

At first I freaked.

Remington?

REMINGTONN?!

But then it was okay. :D




I am a HarrisonxFinlay fangirl. All the way~
Yay for make-up sex ::roll::

:D Can't wait for more.
HikariSapphire
2008-05-21
ch 20,
abuseThis is a wonderful story, but Harrison does seem to have problems keeping his hands to himself. And Finlay is a bit of a jerk. But I like it. And what's going to happen with Odette?
Lac3d w1th p01s0n
2008-05-21
ch 20,
abuseI squee'd so loud when I read this, my friend looked at me funny...
L0v3,
p01s0n3d
patsylooj
2008-05-21
ch 20,
abusei still consider this to be dramarama, btw yo.

god would have it (i've said that in a review before. that says something about this story. xD) that FINLAY AND REMINGTON are going all licky-licky on each other.

so crazy. so crazy.

any youngster who thought of the name kishimoto is just...amazingly out there.

and i say it was a bad move for harrison to call him finny. i mean, he hung up on him so...oh well.

"Finlay looked at me like I just said that I would love to mud wrestle Katja's corpse in purple Jell-O."


EW.
EW.
BIG.
FAT.
EW.
THANK YOU.
HARRISON.

but awsh! they're all together and happy against. all their little bantering back and forth is so cute. i missed it. thank you for bringing it back. just...thank you. it's all that needs to be said.
Ty Taco
2008-05-21
ch 20,
abuseHOW WILL WE NOT LIKE THIS CHAPTER?
HOW DO YOU NOT LIKE THIS CHAPTER?
This chapter was AMAZING.
I LOVED it.
But then again...I love them all.
lol

I loved it.
Can't wait for 21.
xoxoxo,
Ty

PS-
I got Tex hooked on your story [remember when I talked about him?].
Although...I haven't stopped crying for the past three weeks.
Tex moved to Holland May 11th.
The first Great Love of my life [I truly believe that...with all of my heart] was forced into moving to Holland.
And according to the Fabulous Carrie Bradshaw, that mean I only have one Great Love left before it all goes to shit.

[claps my wine glass with yours]

Here's to searching for the one!
patsylooj
2008-05-14
ch 19,
abuseHARRISON.
YOU.
FUCK.
UP.
FUCK.
UP.
FUCK.
UP.

star it out all you want, fictionpress. the meaning goes across JUST AS STRONGLY.

this was...wow. like. ohsnap, girlfriend kind of deal. it makes me so sad when Harrison and Finlay aren't together. they're just too cute.

oh, and who knew that joel was good from the start? me. yeah. i know a good kid when i see one. i can't believe odette is suddenly all oh i'm with another random chick now you're an old friend harrison ahahaha!

but that's what joel is for. we all need a joel. sell him packages, please. like barbies.

well, yeah, know i'm basically just frickin' waiting for everything to be okay again.

and i love you, too. :3 especially for writing this.
Ty Taco
2008-05-14
ch 19,
abuseHare needs to start thinking with his brain fast.
Cuz I happen to like the two main characters of your story together.
:]

xoxoxo,
Ty
multiples of six
2008-05-14
ch 19,
abuseOh, gosh. :/
patsylooj
2008-05-13
ch 18,
abuseoh, i forgot to mention how wonderful the crystian and christian middle names are.

TOO BAD MATHILDA DIED.

i'm just a tad angry. just a tad.

and the moonlight sonata part was so sweet. :[

except now i'm all pissed because mark did something rash in the midst of a tragedy, as well as harrison. what the hell. just...what the hell. i mean, as great as making out on a church pew is...

finlay and harrison need to be together. i can't imagine mark with anyone else right now. him and mathilda were too amazing.

i have to say you're doing a good job with keeping my attention. xD cannot wait to read more.
patsylooj
2008-05-13
ch 17,
abusei love mark. just as much as joel, and that's saying a lot. he's an awesome character with really good traits and opinions and stuff. many many compliments to you on that one.

but of course, someone has to frickin' die off.

good lord.

i'm so mad! mathilda and mark were the best, and they barely lasted! i loved all their plans and their hair and...ugh! notfairnotfairnotfair.


oh, man, the pink daisy part. way to make me get all weepish.

dammit! so mad that she died. gr.

but overall this was a very well written chapter. xD
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