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| Twilight Starr 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really well done. Great job! |
| Orchidy 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow a little bit dramatic but does an artist without inspiration become so hollow in spirit? Symbolic I assume... It could have been made better if it's not thrown together in disarray. Certain punctuations required like for a question, a connection in thoughts, etc... Over all, it gives a sad feeling but somehow not painful enough to assess a deep sympathy from reader. ^_^ Try to poor in more emotions to it by that I mean being a little bit more descriptive. |