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Reviews For: The Soul Of A Broken Artist

Twilight Starr
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written poem.

~Twilight Starr~
Artemis Anderson
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is really well done. Great job!
Orchidy
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseWow a little bit dramatic but does an artist without inspiration become so hollow in spirit? Symbolic I assume...

It could have been made better if it's not thrown together in disarray. Certain punctuations required like for a question, a connection in thoughts, etc...

Over all, it gives a sad feeling but somehow not painful enough to assess a deep sympathy from reader. ^_^

Try to poor in more emotions to it by that I mean being a little bit more descriptive.
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