Reviews for The Fate of Destiny

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Sonya Elizabeth 2008-07-10 ch 28,	abusecute! very cute... a lot of love in this story lol. hope you have a nice sleep haha! eh, idk if i want to read the sequel... let's just see how well you do... i am expecting great things after reading this one! lol great names, by the way!
Abigail Night 2008-06-22 ch 28,	abuseLove It! Love It! Love It! Love It! You absolutely have to keep writing, no questions!
LittleMissAmberLily 2008-06-22 ch 29,	abuseSaranna or whatever, you need to read better, and get some factoids straight-o before reviewing. And yes, I spelled facts and straight wrong before you jump on my case for that. Let's start with the ' too young ' thing. I'm sixteen, almost seventeen, and have the choice of going to college. And people skip grades if they are smart enough. You can be a teacher at 19. I used to have a teacher that age. Not an art teacher, but a teacher in general. Was hot too. Don't assume because of rules that may apply where you live. Pregnancy thing. You didn't read it correctly. Quoted from the story ; "It had been two months since their first time together" TWO MONTHS since their first time, and I'd like to note that Aria got pregnant ON their first time. Do NOT lecture my friend on her knowledge when you don't have anything right, 'kay? You'll just get backfire from her, and I both. She will become a famous writer, and all you haters, and/or lecturers will be feeling like crap for hating on it. And just ahead of time, I don't think I'm a good writer, and I'm not trying to act better, nor is she, but dammit get facts straight! (I actually hate my stories, even ask Vampie)
Destiny 2008-06-22 ch 25, anon.	abuseHey there, Miss Saranna. You could read more carefully. Aria didn't take it right after. She took it two months after. And, you can be a teacher if your 19. It's called skipping grades and all that jazz. While I was writing this story, I had in my mind that Rylan had a very high IQ. Now, even though this is my story and I guess that means I can pick my character's IQ, you obviously think he has a lower IQ or something. But sure, think what ya want :)
saranna 2008-06-22 ch 25, anon.	abuseparts of this story seem a bit unrealistic. if people are having sex, you can't just take a pregnancy test immediately afterwards and find out if you are pregnant. the quickest pregnancy test takes at least 48 hours before detecting pregnancy and most test take at least 6-12 days before you can use the test to tell if you are pregnant. there is no way aria could tell if she was pregnant just hours after having sex.
saranna 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseHow is a teacher only 19 years old? I'm assuming the art school is a high school. In order to teach high school in the US one would have to go to college to get their degree. 19 is way to young.
marilllove 2008-04-14 ch 28,	abuseWow- Great job, not just with this chapter, but the entire story was great =) I can't wait for a sequel
hypa to hell and back 2008-04-13 ch 28,	abuseaww it almost want to make you cry but nah i love it its the best ever heehee im sad its the end though
Jevanminx 2008-04-13 ch 28,	abuseOh, loved it. This story is so cute. I cant wait for a sequel. JM
WriterGurl123 2008-04-13 ch 28,	abuseWow! She had twins who are girls. It would be interesting to see when they get older and how much trouble they're going to cause Rylan. Then Kori's pregnant, but I think she'd be a great mother. Post More Soon!
Michelle 2008-04-01 ch 26, anon.	abuseo__O Wow. Things seem to be moving veryy quickly. Isn't Aria supposed to be smart, so shouldn't she know that getting into a marriage just because there's a baby is bad? But other than the suddenly super fast pace, it's a good story. :D
Sonya Elizabeth 2008-03-31 ch 26,	abusenice chapter. but sequel with their "offspring"... somehow that doesn't sound very.. appealing... but very good chapter!
Sonya Elizabeth 2008-03-31 ch 25,	abusesomehow i knew this would happen...
Sonya Elizabeth 2008-03-31 ch 24,	abusei definately like this. parents fussing, good. just like real life. you definately nailed that one! mad aria - very nicely done! but woah... blissful?? uh oh... somehow it doesn't sound very... aria... but hey its ur story. i like it... i was just surprised she said that... and meant it.
Sonya Elizabeth 2008-03-31 ch 23,	abuseoh my gawd! i can't stop laughing!! that was GREAT!perfect timing Chris!!

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