i'm normal! freakin normal. i thought i was the only one who gets sick when i dont eat. love the story. you write like a profesional.(did i spell that right)keep on writin

I feel sick when I don't soon enough, but I haven't let
you get so bad that I get sick so I don't know if I would
or not. Anyways, still pretty funny, Addie

Wouldn't they ask you for your parents signatures
if you did enroll in a new school? Oh and yes
I do like your story so far. Keep on keeping
on. Killer Chipmunk

I like odd numbers, but Hope's explination was weird

The only thing I hate morethan being a billboard is being like most other people. My firends and I like being different.

She talks too much!

The dream and phone conversation have to be scary for her. The Mr. Phone Friend name is funny. It's hilarious that he was actually polite. Nice cliffhanger. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

I liked the flashback. It was nice to hear about Tristan's history. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

The bantering between them was cute. ^^ Nice work. It's great to see an update.

~Twilight Starr~

This sounds really interesting! Oh, by the way, I'm new around here. Nice prologue.

It's me, and for some reason the signy inny thing isn't working. Good chapter, I will continue reading, but just one thing. Why isn't this chapter dedicated to corners?

How far behind I have gotten in reading and reviewing! Most of this is really good... The portion about the newsbroadcast is in the same style as your narrative. Most newscasts have distinctive crisp style of "talking" more like they are addressing a group than just conversing...not sure how to do this but it is the only thing that seemed a little unreal.
3 chapters in one day!

Great chapters Ali,
just one thing. In chap. 15 when they are arguing about who is being testy and all that, since the dialogue goes on for a while it's kind of hard to figure out who is saying what anymore... you know? like:
the girl grabbed the fork and glared at the boy.
"it's my fork!"
"No it's mine!"
"No MINE!"
"MINE"
"it is my fork and you know it!"
"I know no such thing that fork is fine!"
"My fork"
"My fork"
"Mine"
"No the fork is definately mine!"
"NO the fork belongs to me!"
"the fork does not belong to you, It was my mothers, and she gave it to me!"
"Why would your mother give YOU The Fork?"
"Because I'm awesome"
"No you aren't"
"yes I am!"
"No you arent"
"yes I am!"
who is who?
sorry if that's not a good example, but you get my point right?
ok anyway, but it's good keep up the good work.

Ok sorry, one thing I forgot to say.
“I get sick when I don’t eat for a while. That’s why I’ve never been anorexic or anything before. I can’t go for more than twenty hours not eating."
right here, when Shay says this, it almost makes it sound like she would have gone anorexic if it weren't for the barfing thing. Which I don't think she would have... not that I'm the expert, but it just seemed phrased a little strangely.

Whoa it's up! Anyway, all I have to say is good job, the pop tart thing actually sounds kinda good, and sadness about Mask, I had a dog who was put down. It was horrible, my mom had him before I was born, so he had been there all my life, and then he got really really old, and had to be put down. anyway, good job... I already said that didn't I, oh well.