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| Twilight Starr 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWell worded poem. Nice title. It flows well. I especially like the opening line. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseYou're good. This is really, really deep and I like it a lot. I absolutely LOVE the lines, "Cold is the night/Cold is the goodbye". It's amazing. You've written another one of my favorites. Great job!! Love, Gemma P.S. Sorry if you're having girl troubles. I've heard we can be a pain sometimes. It'll get better. |
| M.J. Dawn 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow.. this was pretty much amazing. lol I think it takes a lot to write what you feel in the moment. Anyways, hope to read more from you & feel free to read and review my story... I'd appreciate it! -Marie Jane |