I would like to follow this story >w

Omg i luvd the ending. e onli thing knda disappointing in dis was the sex scene,that cld of been better.

WTTF NO!

Evrytime i thnk i get it i get lost!!
ugh this is soo frustrating. nd does connon luv her:S...i thouhgt he didnt. uggh

Did I just hear 'sequel'? I think I just did. Great job!

Omg. I absolutely loved this ending. It was perfect...I had totally forgotten that Nicholas could bring her back!

I gotta say. That was one of the best fight scenes I've read in a while...but you killed Ally. You're a meanie. D:

Aw. Heads. :)

I'm sensing hot and steamy sex.

She killed Laine's mum? How rude.

Can you say rejection? Ouch.

GASP. NICHOLAS.

I'm going to kidnap Laine. He's adorable.

Hot damn. Didn't realize she was colorblind. But yeah. That was another rather emo chapter. :C

Omg. Laine is so cute.