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Leaves of Labefaction 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseAHH! I don't see a blue purple button! NO! Screams and rips out hair Anyway, about your song. I like the chorus, but you could use some punctuation such as commas where there are pauses in the song, so it has more rhythm. "Hate is the word That describes my life Pain endures suffering strife" That would have to be my favorite part, though you have a lot of good lines.
Forward in Time 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseI liked it. It atleast was interesting.