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Raven Kay
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseThis was a tough decision but...
Best: Fenrir
Orginality: Stormcat
Mechanics: Fenrir
Catseye*Rose
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Maybe

Originality: Fenrir

Best: Stormcat

Good bunch ^_^ It was hard to choose...
Myriadragon
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuseMech--Chiomi
Orig--Fenrir
Best--Stormcat
Angel TWC
2007-12-29
ch 7,
abuseOriginality

this is a really neat story good job ^_^
Angel TWC
2007-12-29
ch 6,
abuseMechanics
Angel TWC
2007-12-29
ch 3,
abuseBest

great wirtting i love this plot line
Fenrir
2007-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseMechanics: Chiomi
Originality: Maybe
Best: Stormcat
henred5
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Finir

Originality: Maybe

Best: Stormcat
henred5
2007-12-25
ch 8,
abuseWell written and quite interesting too, and original title. :XD
henred5
2007-12-25
ch 7,
abuseThe most weird but fantastic short story I've read in a while nods
Bravo!
henred5
2007-12-25
ch 6,
abuseQuite a funny piece.
I wounder what inspired you to write this...
henred5
2007-12-25
ch 5,
abuseBrilliant! Very mysterious here and there but I loved it all the same for it...if
not more!
I hope you continue this.
henred5
2007-12-25
ch 4,
abuseI didn't really get this...but then again it's not the sort of story I would read normally. Anyway it was quite confusing but in places were developed and written.
I think you pulled off the whole 1st person quite well too.
henred5
2007-12-23
ch 3,
abuseI can't believe this is present tense that actually works well here!
Anyway brilliant part to the storyline...I did admittedly have to go back to get back into the whole story, but so far it looks brilliant!
Wings-of-Ink
2007-12-17
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Fenrir
Originality: Raven Kay
Best: Fenrir
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