I love it. It's so wonderfully...creepy. xD I got the song Charlene (I'm right behind you) by Stephen Colbert stuck in my head though, lmao.

This was so haunting, I loved it.

Oh er.

Made me shiver, especially the Rufus bit. Poor Rufus! It took me 1 or 2 readings of the first bit to get my mind in focus, but it was really good.

How delightfully creepy.

The characterization is fantastic, as well. Very nicely done.

Nicely done. I've always liked stories about schizophrenia. Love the ending.

Interesting idea.