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| SweetNightmares08 2008-01-30 ch 1,  | abuse*Gasp!* My God, you have just completely written me down in ten sentences. That was abolutely amazing and downright brilliant. You are a truly an inspiring and downright wonderful writer. I loved every moment of it. I've read some poems that I thought were beautiful but this one takes the cake. Beautiful. |
| loversdream17 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseGREAT~ I love it. I really liked how you kept up the flow nice and smooth and how you did a great job at rhymming and not forcing it for it flows from one line to the next. My favorite lines: Don't let people see, each day a charade, ever twirling, in this hellish masquerade. Mandi~4~life |