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| Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-28 ch 1,   | This sounds pretty good to me, although I'm horrible at judging song lyrics. They seem original to me, though, compared to others I've read. Some of my favorite phrasing included 'Winds Of Power, Rain Of Shade' and 'When Water Swallows My Soul?' One thing - why did you capitalize every word? That distracted me a lot, and I see no reason for every word being capitalized. |
| Immortal Butterfly 2007-12-04 ch 1, | I love the rhythm of this one! It's so awesome! I love the way the words meld amd mesh to just flow off your tongue like one long sentence... Awesome! Keep up the great work! |