i liked it! only thing is the ending, it does seem to have ended a little quickly, and when i read it in my mind, it sounded a little doubtful, as if wade wasn't too sure about his decision in the end.

but all in all, it's a lovely story. i'm gonna go read more of your stories now. (:

Very cute story. I bet he was projecting his feelings for Derrick on to the other twin just because he looked the same, but more sexual, so he was waking up the attraction that he didn't realize he had for his best friend... or maybe I'm overanalyzing :P

i like it. good job

Aww... too bad he didn't get with the hott emo kid...
oh well.
I still like it, though.
Lee

To cute.

No wonder that Wade’s prancing around shirtless or just in boxes went on Derrick’s nerve, I mean who likes to have a meat dangling before their hungry eyes.

I love how a kiss changed Wade's mind so quickly, and it is believable, I mean if it opened Sleeping beauty's eyes, why not Wade's.

And that happens a lot in real life, that somebody likes you and you don't know nothing about it, doesn't it.

Great story.

ah, damn you and your one shots...
This was absolutely adorable. I loved it. Derrick probably seething in the shadow of his brother Daniel, wanting to catch Wade's eye and it was all for not. Fortunately he decided to take the bull by the horn, so to speak and make a move.
I love your narrative voice, it's wonderful and has terrific flow and you've got a great ear for dialogue. And such great details. I loved it immensely.
And of course, ti would go with out say that there's just so much potential fro more sotry here, you know, just in case your muse were to ponder it for a bit.. Oh hte possibilities. I know, just shoot me. I'm ag reedy bastard, I can't help myself.

Cute. I would have liked to see more resolution, I guess, at the end, but this was sweet too, "this was definitely better than anything would be with Daniel ...". :)

I liked it.
I thought it was ADORABLE.
Your one-shots are REALLY good.
:)

xoxoxoxoxoxo,
Ty

Oh, this is cute. I love the "spooning" line.

Nice! =)

Oh. My. God. THIS IS THE SHIZNIT!! I

Aww sweet as hell, very well written, loved it :)

Shoot. You just come up with the sweetest oneshots. I love happy endings and all that good goey awness. That was great.

very well done! I loved it--your romances always make me smile! Fantastic work, keep it up!

Aww how cute! Rock on for mentioning MCR and the BP! Long live the BP! Anyway, um yeah, you probably should fix the ending later but if you want to leave it like that it's okay. It's good I like it!
-FHY

This is very cute. :) Good work.