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| artistic dreamer 2008-04-16 ch 7,  | abusei'm so glad you decided to continue, when 2007 ended (...that sounds weird) i was like, oh no! there's not gonna be anymore one shots! and she's not even finished yet! this one is cute, i like it, please continue with the remaining three, or more! hahah, and no, i think you should keep your penname :) |
| artistic dreamer 2007-12-22 ch 4, | abuseaw! how cute! and the name Jubee is adorable! post more up soon! it's all right if you're behind schedule :] |
| artistic dreamer 2007-12-12 ch 3, | abuseaw...that's so sad :( this story is so simple, but yet it holds so much emotion. that must be heartbreaking to find the guy you love in love with your younger TWIN sister. my heart goes out to that girl. it wasn't as angsty as i thought it would be, so i think this one is actually not that bad... but i can't wait for your fluffy one tomorrow! lol keep writing! love your stories! |
| violin-lady13 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abusei love one-shots that make me say aw... and this is definitely one of them. Great job! |
| Sally Can Wait 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseSounds a bit like my first dance expirience, only minus the Arthur thing. xD Loved it, as usual. -Sallykins (UGH GOTTA GO STUDY PRECAL.) |
| artistic dreamer 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abusehaha! mila is funny, her babbling on and on and on...cute stuff!! and i like this one, it's different, the plot, how she's dressed in sweats but andrew doesn't seem to mind, i really like it! looking forward to the next one, even though it's gonna be angsty. |
| artistic dreamer 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abusegreat idea! i love reading Christmas stories, especially during Christmas time! ...wait...that sounded stupid...ah, oh wells, i can't wait to read your other nine one-shots! especially if it's gonna be cute and fluffy, lol! i like this one, caitlin is so cute! can't wait to read your next one! |
| gummybearmurder 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseEEP! I totally squealed at the end of this. Nice job! |
| White Rabbit Tale 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is an excellent idea and a great start for your one-shot collection. I love the trying-to-be-suave and failing flirting. Can't wait for the next wintery one-shot! |
| Sally Can Wait 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseLily, dahling! xD "“Yeth. And you’re Al,” I mumbled." *giggle* “Baby, your cocoa ain’t the only thing that’s hot.” Although, if someone said that to me I'd probably hit them over the head with my very large purse. Or I'd be like, "Trust me, my cocoa is the only thing that's hot around here." So cute. :3 The first paragraph had a couple of grammar errors, sentence structure, but other than that, it was awesome! :D Keep up ze good work. -Sally |
| crystalpen 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseXD Haha, fluff |