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| gigglebug 2008-01-24 ch 1,   | Have you tried your hand at poems? (I've only read a handful of all this so far, so if there is one on here, I haven't gotten to it yet.) I don't know if that's in the area of creative writing, but I seem to be better at critiquing those than stories. All my stories are awful - you know, mindless little things that didn't really go anywhere. I think this would be interesting if you gave a little more insight on what the fight was about. Or perhaps that's the reason behind the girl's last sentence... hm... I'll throw a pet-peeve at you. Great work! =P |