Hmm..why does this remind me of someone?Hehe..I just wish this person would read this wonderful poem and understand what I'm trying to say.Anyways...this poem's nice.Like it very much.

Wow, this really is an all-around powerful poem. Love it. *adds to favorites*

"Relieve yourself
For once in your life
Rebuild yourself"

That's a powerful line.


This poem was inspirational. The only real qualm I have is how "your world" is bold; I prefer italics--but that's just personal preference.

If the world is mine to mold, I need to stop sitting on my hands and get to it. The poem was excellent as usual and your writing is STILL improving (I know I've said it before), so you must be taking your creativity seriously and I praise you for that!

I really like this poem. It's one of those poems that the WORLD just needs to sit down and read every now and then. By the way, how have you been? I see your writing is progressively getting better which is great. Yeah, I did fall off the face of the earth, yet again (I really need to stop doing that, but college pushes me over the edge...). Anyway, the Samurai Poet is here, with three new pieces. Keep up the good writing and have a Merry Christmas. Also I promise not to fall of the earth's surface (I have to stop reviewing this way!)

hey! Whats up, aint talked to u in awhile, it sux...u missed me.admit it...lol...anywho, i liked this, it was really chill, good job.


-TwilightWolf

*blinks* Okay, that's a nice poem.
I wonder what was on your mind when you where writing this. Or better question who?
*blinks and looks away* Heh, naw couldn't be.
Very easy to read for me at least Kari.

Beautiful, i like the message. Did you mean residency? (im a horrible speller though so you might want to check up on that.)