Beautiful!

I love how it flows so nicely, and describes it in a way that I can imagine easily. It reminds me of a dream I had... But no one had been there to miss her then.

Anyway, this is an amazing story in verse, and I loved it.
Also makes me all the more curious about the taste of blood...

Ja~

wonderfully morbid!~!

well, i liked it. And you're SO right about the death catagory thingy... Nicely done! AND HURRY WITH THE 7th CHAPTER!

I've been wishing they'd add a death category since fp split off from fanfiction, or even before XD. No clue if anyone's really tried to contact the admins, though.

Not the most original idea, but nicely executed. Strawberry sauce and cherry juice blood? Sounds almost tasty X]. Wish I could bleed that sweet.

LaDiablo

Nicely done, it's too bad you aren't sure what it's about lol

that is a really good story. i don't care if i wrote it, but it is really good. of course it is, everything i write is good. so, for all you ppl w/ no lives who are wasting their time reading the reviews i've gotten, then why don't u read something else of mine?

I like it. It was kinda sad.:( but still good. :) keep writing!