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| A little birdie once told m... 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I'm just hoping that you have plans of continuing this. It really does seem like a great read. And I would LOVE to read more. Please keep writing! |
| elisefey 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was intense. You had action from the get-go that pulled me right in. The drama nearly had me holding my breathe. Good job on that! |
| Silveralsa 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseAction packed beginning of a story. Just wanted to make sure I'm reading it right, you're referring to Los Angeles gangs right? Lol, didn't want to get my geography confused ;) |
| -pumpkinhead- 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abusewhoaa i lovee itt!! keep on writin o |