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| Last.Real Record Store onEa... 2007-12-03 ch 1,   | Once again, the amazingness of your writing has knocked me on my **. You Are Freaking Awesome ...Congratulotions! |
| chochang913 2007-12-02 ch 1, | Jaja, seething. Nice. Love your style. You've got some pretty obvious grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad, nothing a non-grammar nazi would notice. The only problem with this style... is that I really have no idea what you're trying to communicate. It's a jumble of emotions and pretty phrases that I don't really know what to make of. I like the sound, I like the flow, I love the way it rolls off the tongue... but I haven't a clue what your theme is. X] |