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Reviews For: He thinks your something different

Last.Real Record Store onEa...
2007-12-03
ch 1,
Once again, the amazingness of your writing has knocked me on my **.

You
Are
Freaking
Awesome

...Congratulotions!
chochang913
2007-12-02
ch 1,
Jaja, seething. Nice. Love your style. You've got some pretty obvious grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad, nothing a non-grammar nazi would notice.

The only problem with this style... is that I really have no idea what you're trying to communicate. It's a jumble of emotions and pretty phrases that I don't really know what to make of. I like the sound, I like the flow, I love the way it rolls off the tongue... but I haven't a clue what your theme is. X]
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