Once again, the amazingness of your writing has knocked me on my ass.

You

Are

Freaking

Awesome

...Congratulotions!

Jaja, seething. Nice. Love your style. You've got some pretty obvious grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad, nothing a non-grammar nazi would notice.

The only problem with this style... is that I really have no idea what you're trying to communicate. It's a jumble of emotions and pretty phrases that I don't really know what to make of. I like the sound, I like the flow, I love the way it rolls off the tongue... but I haven't a clue what your theme is. X]