I like this =]. It reminds me of indie lyrics. Straylight Run, actually, which I suppose are a bit less than indie... Nevertheless. Lyrical.

I'd say my favorite line was "it was like ringing/to a swinging/solar eclipsed front porch wind chime," most likely because I had to stop and contemplate it for a moment ^__^.

Really... What drew me in to reading this was that someone else posted about drinking tonight X]. Busy weekend?