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| chochang913 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseSo alliterate! X] I like it. Looks like you put some work into this one, what with the charming flow of words. Favorited =]. |
| softer side of apples 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS ESPECIALLY THE LINE THAT SAYS " A DREAM DREAMT, DISCARDED & DISCOVERED" THAT LINE WAS S OPOWERFUL TO ME... |
| wayward-wordsmith 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abusethe contrasts and alliterations really catch your attention and force you to pay attention. i like it. thanks. |