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Reviews For: The finding of a Hope
Senorita Diabla 2007-12-03 . chapter 1
So alliterate! X] I like it. Looks like you put some work into this one, what with the charming flow of words. Favorited =].
softer side of apples 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS ESPECIALLY THE LINE THAT SAYS " A DREAM DREAMT, DISCARDED & DISCOVERED" THAT LINE WAS S OPOWERFUL TO ME...
wayward-wordsmith 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
the contrasts and alliterations really catch your attention and force you to pay attention. i like it. thanks.
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