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Reviews For: The finding of a Hope

chochang913
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuseSo alliterate! X] I like it. Looks like you put some work into this one, what with the charming flow of words. Favorited =].
softer side of apples
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abuseI REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS ESPECIALLY THE LINE THAT SAYS " A DREAM DREAMT, DISCARDED & DISCOVERED" THAT LINE WAS S OPOWERFUL TO ME...
wayward-wordsmith
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abusethe contrasts and alliterations really catch your attention and force you to pay attention. i like it. thanks.
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