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| Minxie 2008-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseLOVED IT! it was so awesome! Good Job! |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseomg that was sweet as! i loved it! def going in my favs =] =] =] x |
| tree of life and shadow 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abusei liked it, but i think it would have been better if you made longer. it would have benefited from more character development i think. but i liked the story itself. i wish telling smeone you loved was that easy...especially if it's your friend :) |
| Emma Rose 2007-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good! I love these kinds of storys! |
| hypa to hell and back 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseok love me love me not but i love it and what you have written i think it fantastic it rock seriuosly it does im your first reviewer so im going to just... im not sure i adore it thats all i can say really it is i cant find any thing wrong with it the description is so good and imagery is perfect heehee um so yeah any way i dont always say ths with one shot but i am with yours ok i think you could either do some thing before it or after it you know the past or future like what made them fall in love with each other or like the after effects on the other poeple around them you know you could have some conflict in there i dont know think of some thing but you could do possible extras to it say in an A/N that its just an extra few chapters to see what might hapen after ward coz nothing ends in total bliss does it never can end in total bliss even if they are destined to be with each other every one has their differences i think it would be so cool if you did do that you dont have to listen to what i just said but think aout it i would certainly read it any way love it love it you rock honestly you do heehee jez |
| Michelle 2007-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought it was very good. You could expand this into a really good longer story |
| vio923 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseCute! I like it -- except for one thing. Why was Cassidy at his house? Since he never brought his girlfriends there before and way planning the surprise party for Anna why did he take her home with him? Why didn't Anna ask him about it when he apologized for ignoring her? It is an open/nagging question that bothers me. |